I ended up chopping off some of the left side. I thought about reattaching it to the right side, but it didn't work. I also muted the blue down a bit with paint. The piece is ok, but I'm not really excited about it, so I started another one, this time larger, not so busy. I'm not ready to show it yet, maybe next week. I'm not so sure why I can look at a friends work and immedietly see if something isn't right, but my own work is so hard to critique, even the obvious stuff. I do photograph it and look at the image, and sometimes that helps, but showing it to others, whose judgement I trust really makes a difference.
Our son Sam left for Australia last night. He's planning on being gone about a year, traveling the country, working, and hopefully traveling on to other parts of the world. A grand adventure for him.
I hope this is the trip of a lifetime. I hope he does not meet and fall in love with a wonderful Australian girl, get married and live there forever. If so, Brenda http://www.brendagaelsmith.com/ will have to become his stepmom!
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Removing some of the left side definitely works Karen - your friend was right!
Of course, if he married a Queensland girl, Kirsty would be closer. In either case, you would definitely have to come and visit!
Somehow I think both you and Kirsty would spoil him so he'd never want to came back. And we are hoping to visit, maybe October.
I was going to suggest cropping it - what a difference! I just went through that with my crit group: they suggested cropping a piece and it got into Form not Function. This week, different piece, same suggestion. Is there a pattern here?
I agree, it is always easy to see what needs to be done with somebody else's work - but when it comes to our own - we are too close to it.
Hope Sam doesn't settle across the planet - but I do hope he has a great adventure.
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